Ya know I was reading this new update of yours, and I sat down with my nice ice cold lemon-ade and a nice piece of Lemon-marang pie.... Heh =3
Author's Response: Oh please not you too.... the lemons... AGH!!! They are infecting my brain!!!Much.... Appreciated
I'm with Illumini on this, its missing something of the lemony taste.... =3 Excellent chapter nonetheless
Author's Response: ...... I would rather, oh hell why don't I just put it out there.... In exactly 5-6 more chapters (not including the ones with fluff in them) I will do another lemon. It might even be sooner than that. As always... Much Appreciated
Mmm... Well, it was a decent chapter, I for one can't wait to see Chris' fate next chapter... But it just felt... Lacking... In something... A passage of a citrus variety... A literary piece of which there is a website dedicated to a party of it... I guess what I'm trying to say is...
Lemon?
Author's Response: For those of you who don't know, that are currently reading this, four people tortured me last night about another lemon...The very bane of my existance that I put in this story a chapter ago.
Anyway, As always... Much.... Appreciated
Nice chapter! I love the reunion between them, it adorable and very wanton at the same time. Those two are so cute together, and you've done it very well. Now...*pulls out AK-47* where is this target?!
Author's Response: I like the fact that people are actually enjoying this story... Thank you. As for the target... Well just wait... soon, it will all come out.As always... Much Appreciated ^_^
Ok... Do I have to E-Slap you? Who is this target!?
Ugh... anyway before I lose my mind on trying to figure out, you did a nice job on the lemon, even though you did get right to it, but for someone of your stature you did quite well. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Um... pass on the E-slap. The target? Um, sorry you will have to wait just like everyone else.As far as the lemon goes, yeah I know its somewhat of a turn around for someone of my stature, but I figured what the hell... why not. As always...
Much Appreciated ^_^
...wow....amazing...wow...
Author's Response: (As David from "Independence Day" would say) Wait... which part?Anyway as always your CC is always welcome. Much Appreciated ^_^
....MUST....SEE....MOOOOOOOORE.......
Author's Response: Dear God! Um did you happen to read the part about Writer's block? UGH! *Scribbles out a new chapter in two seconds* There, they screw, that good enough? As always though, Much Appreciated ^_^
-jaw drop-
Author's Response: .... hmmm... how to comment on this... Much Appreaciated ^_^
A job well done as always, sweetie! ^__^
Author's Response: Hey, you know just as well as I do that people proof read my stuff... (Huh wonder who that could be ^_^) Yet, (I hope the community doesn't get mad at me for this) what everyone else with the exception of you and Necros don't know is that Knuckles gets..... Wait.... Did I just almost screw that up again? I need to work on that. As always though, Much appreciated ^_^
7months big time difference, but apparently nothing too important happened in between times, hmm, short sex but descriptive, follow your heart shadow already seems to do. you write well.
Author's Response: I thank you for the constructive criticism. Being an open minded person, such as myself, I have to pace what I write in the way of Sonadow. However.... It does help. Much Appreciated ^_^
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