OMG... I swear to you... you have such a nack for writing. Keep this up... please keep writing this.
Author's Response: ...Really? Wow, thanks! I will keep going, don't worry. XD Not going to leave this one unfinished if I cna help it.
But you have fresh ideas and you know how to express them. Other authors too but I personally like the essence of your writings, your way of describing and placing the scenes are unequalled. I'm not such a profesional reviewer or anything like that but your stories in special this story, make me check everyday the website to see if you have updated something. :)
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I update irregularly and most of the time with gaps, so don't worry about it too much. Thanks, though!
wow!!! this is so awesome!! you are my most favorite author ever ever ever!!! I just was wondering when you'll update a deal for you, that story is great too but of course I think this is your best work, it's so wonderful!
Author's Response: A Deal For You is pretty much on hold at the moment. It isn't up to this standard, and I'm not willing to continue until I can at least bump up the value of it. This one comes first. Glad you like it, though. And favourite author, really? There are some on this site who kick my ass!
OH SH*T. This chapter is... wow. Vert scenerific, if you ask me. My opinion probably doesn't matter because I'm not some big shot author, but from all of us down in poorwritingville, we salute you.
Author's Response: You're not in poorwritingville - I'm not all that good by wide standards! I am, howveer, gald you enjoy it! ^^
Beautiful prose. I like the violent and dramatic style of writing, very epic and evocative. I really, really hope Shadow was in time and didn't sacrifice himself instead or something...the lives of the slaves that you describe are truly miserable and make me despise their abusers. As for your 'not another F*king slave fic' dreads, I can calm you - I, for my part am still very much in love with the genre. :P Why, I wonder? ;)
Cheers,
Taranea^^
Author's Response: Did I mention that if you fail to continue He Is My Master I shall hunt you down and put you through an agonising death? XD But thanks very much, I'm glad you like it! Sonic's and Shadow's fate is unknown. Decided, by moi *grins* but unknown. Sonic migth be dead, or Shadow mortally injured, or something else.
...wow...
Author's Response: *falls over* Wow! Thanks very much! ...I take it you like it? And thank-you so much for the featured!
Goodness gracious theres a lot of description in this. I certianly hope sonics okay. Damn you for not telling us in the new chapter! XD
Brilliant chapter again, keep it up =)
Author's Response: :D Sonic's fate won't be revealed for a very long time now, I'm afraid. O_O Glad you enjoyed reading it, however!
And when is the next chapter due? I swear, you are doing absolutely outstanding with this story! I can't wait to see more.Well done!
Author's Response: *blsuhs furiously and trips over* Wow, I'm glad you guys are liking it so much! Sonic seems to enjoy revieiwng; Shadow not so much. That is my goal; make a chapter good enough for him to review it!
This is just getting better and better!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it so far! Wow...a standard to keep up!
You left Sonic's fate ambiguous. That means he is still alive. Of course it does. Eee hee hee... Anyway, great chapter. I seriously wish I could write like you. Good thing Shadow escaped, he can rescue Sonic now! Who is still alive, remember? That's what my chainsaw says.
Author's Response: Weeeell...not necessarily. *eyes chainsaw warily* Um, hehe... well, the flashback could've occured anytime...a few minutes prior, or years...who knows? XD No-one but me!
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