Mmm... Very nice... The way the paragraphs begin is a little weird, particularly when it comes to the dialog - It looks strange compared to the rest of the text. You've also fallen victim to the common cliche of Shadow being the only kind master/slaver in the entire world - Not that I'm in any authority to critique that. It just seems more OOC when he's a slaver, rather than just an owner. Otherwise, very good job - I like how you introduce Sonic and Tails to each other especially. Continue this soon!

Author's Response:

Thank you! Coming from you that means quite the bundle. The idea of Shadow being the slave makes me laugh, partly because I don't know how to take that story long. It would be too crazy for me. The 3 hour drive to Williamsburg will get me pretty far, as well as the 3 hour drive back. ^^ Hopefully I'm able to spew some basics out by then. Thanks again! ~Miles Prower~