Hmmm... not too bad. A few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing too too serious. I wonder where you will go with this.
Author's Response: hehe that's what i was wondering that too but I won't update it soon, since I'm failing histology at school and I have to study more.
Interesting
Author's Response: thanks i'm glad you've liked it.
Hmmm... Sounds interesting.
Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you've liked it.
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