Mental note: don't piss this Sonic off. He'll kill you all.

So Shadow's been raped, has he? Interesting. This seems to be a good plot idea, plus Shadow's reaction to Sonic seems fairly realistic. It makes me wonder if you have experience... nah. Hopefully not. I wouldn't wish that on anyone... despite the fact that I might or might not have a fanfic in which that very scenario happens, just not with Shadow. Or poison. =/ It also won't be on here, ah, but I digress.

You have a very entertaining writing style, good grammar, and spelling. You write an enjoyable story, one that's easy to get into. Now, since you're using preconstructed characters and worlds, that's not precisely hard to do, but some people can't even manage THAT much! I must say, I do like how you have Sonic have what amounts to a split personality, where, when in periods of extreme emotional duress, he changes into a personality infinitely more vicious, savage, ruthless, and lethal, while his dominant personality blacks out. I do like his beta personality, though, much more than I like normal Sonic. I love anti-heroes, and heroes with a darkside that happens to be the primary antagonist, which it is already clear that this is the case, considering you've pretty much already burried Eggman. I like that too. ;D

Sen'Tzu, Being of Darkness and Light.

Author's Response: Thanks muchly for reading! It feels good to know that No, I haven't been raped, though I know a few people who had been (note: I'm saying people, not just girls). Still a virgin at 18, I'd like to wait a little while longer. And I'd never wish it on anyone either, because after the event passes, mentally it's a total teardown of your emotional walls, leaving you open and vulnerable to the opinion and views of others. I studied this when I was at school in psychology. Strange how it never seems to exit your brain... I hate Eggman, I really do. He's just some old geezer farting about with robots. He doesn't have any potential to be evil. Thank you, Sen'Tzu, for your review, and it gives me the self-esteem boost I need to keep my smile up all day! Thank you again!! =D

DAMN GOOD ADDITION! I like what you have going on here. I know you can't update more, and that's completely understandable. I myself just got hit with emergency jobs after I got back... so I'm up all night tonight.

Good luck on your next chapter, and well done! Very well done indeed!

Author's Response: Thanks! =D I hope your work situation sorts itself out for you... Lots of thankies for the five stars! And good luck to you too!~

Finally, Eggman behind bars^^

Author's Response: I know! I got so sick of hearing that Eggman is trying to take over the world... AGAIN!!!.... or he is killed. For ONCE the VILLAIN can be behind bars and not the hero. You know, I wonder how Eggman gets all of his resources to make all those robots? He doesn't have money...

Upload! Upload! Upload more!!!!

Oooo.... I like what you have written here. You have me most intrigued. Please continue... otherwise I'm going to go completely bonkers over here. Well done!