Betrayed...

I feel betrayed... Lies? What is this? To my face, on my deathbed? Would you kiss your mother with that mouth?

On a brighter side, nice piece! It was hard for me to let go of, as I read it a few times through before finally letting it go.

Thanks for the fic! ~Miles Prower~

Author's Response:

Heh... anytime Miles.

Thanks for the review! ^^

Now I know why you asked me whether or not it was a good idea to do a romantic flashback. I had no idea that you had changed the beginning of the chapter, but I don't care.

Well played Sonic! ^_^

Author's Response:

Eh well, on one hand I figured that I should ask someone, and you just happened to be in the office last week. As for changing the beginning of the chapter... well... that was a decision I made at a last minute. I thought 'Well, I might as well try this and see how it goes.' To my amazement it seemed to play out very well, and I was even thinking just how crazy I was for coming up with something in such a short time.

Thanks for the review Lemon ^^

NOW GO UPDATE SHADOWS AND DUST OR GENESIS!!!

My brain is malFUNCTIONING after reading that!

Author's Response:

I'm guessing that seeing the star rating I got from you, and your apparent reaction... I think I did well on this one. I just don't know what your brain is malFUNCTIONING about, hehe.

Thanks for the review ^^

This is truly an excellent story, very exciting. I really enjoy how you have pulled off insanity. It is, in truth, nothing more than a different way of looking at the world, though a better way is looking at it as it really is, as opposed to what people want to see. I like the inclusion of Dark Sonic, quite realistic, after all. I can't wait until Shadow steps into the scene. This story is an awesome one, and it is really well written. Glad to see a truly great story.

Sentzu, Being of Darkness and Light.

Author's Response:

I am glad that you enjoyed what is left of my miserable mind. Granted the evolution of his insanity will be much more noticeable in the next chapter, and I understand that one has to see it as it is rather than what people want to see, but like I said... his insanity will be going through an evolutionary stage. How far though? Heh, none can really say at this point.

Thanks for the review ^^

Yeah, there's no doubting it now. He's lost it

Author's Response:

Oh? You think he's lost it? This is just merely the beginning XD

Thanks for the review ^^