cool! can't wait for more!!

Author's Response:

There will be more ^^

You can trust me on that.

Please make more!!!!
This story is well written that I almost felt like crying...poor Sonic.
Must read more!!>:D

Author's Response:

Well, I'll see what I can do. For now though, I have to sit back and think about how to approach the next chapter. It's not easy writing my insanity on paper. I mean hell, the first chapter is actually a re-write. I originally did it from Dr. Cream's point of view, but then thought...

"This is sub-standard work. Why not write it as my insane self?"

I guess my work paid off. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Fuck.

Fucking shit.

I have no way to describe how awesome this is.

This is very powerful writing you've got here. The first person view really puts you into Sonic's head - And indeed, the head of insanity. This is a really great idea, though I get the feeling that this story will be depressing as hell. There were maybe, one or two grammatical errors, but I'm really just nitpicking now. Absolutely amazing, and I hope to see more in the future.

By the way... You realise I'm going to inundate you with demands for a lemon, right?

Author's Response:

This was something I had never see before, something kept nagging me, telling me, wanting me to write this. However, I couldn't figure out how to though. I remember, back in japan about six years ago, I had a class where a particular short poem/piece of literature was written, and everytime I passed it I would stop to read it. I decided to go in search of this piece, and after weeks on end of trying to find it.... I did. If you want me to send it to you sometime, just ask.

As for the grammatical errors, I know that I'm not the most grammatically correct person in the world, but I do know when to ask for proof reads and constructive criticism before I go and submit anything. I do it on a regular basis at work with Lemon to make sure that any work we submit to the boss is A.J. Squared away (At least thats what Lemon says on a daily basis).

The story won't be as depressing as you might think. I have a pretty good idea as to how this will play out, where it will go, and what will happen to him.

Thanks for the review!

Oh and about the Lemon to this story... obviously you wouldn't know me very well. You honestly think I wouldn't put one in here?

I would say, its great to find a story like this.

Author's Response:

A brand new approach, something that I haven't seen yet. If there is something out there like this, then by all means let me know, I would like to see it.

Thanks for the review!

Well, he's definently nuts. Great job writing that

Author's Response:

Why thank you. I didn't know how this would possibly play out, but I guess my first impression was wrong. Thank you!