Sonic's really something in this one. I'd like to see more of it.

Ya know.... I was wondering when you were going to do something like this.

I was also wondering when you would update this as well, and you complain that I don't update often. Heh... you have a much better story than I do for sure! Just don't take too long on the next chapter now.

Author's Response:

Well, I do have obligations now. Shadow, that hedgehog, has been bothering me about it.

Oh, I like this. A few problems I noticed, though: ...over, and over again, and again...

Try instead: ...over and over, again and again...

All in all, though, well done. I'm still waiting for Sonic to start speaking through Shadow's Emerald, though.

As for next chapter, is it not obvious? More death, more blood, more violence... perhaps a bit of rape, maybe a hedgehog with black quills who looks just a bit like Shadow without the red markers... hehehe.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the update on that small bit. I didn't exactly remember how it was supposed to be written, but you got that covered for me.

Sonic through Shadow's emerald? Neh... who knows at this point.

Thanks for the review ^^

Ooooh....emmm...geeee! That was sooooo sexy!! I loved every single word in this chapter!! Well, most of it, as I'm not the biggest Shadow seme fan, but it was still so good and well written!! You are so very talented >w<! I was waiting for this chapter for soooo long! Thanks for uploading! I hope you can continue as soon as you can! >w<

Author's Response:

I try my best!

I know it took me such a loooooong time, but I more than made up for it in the Lemon right?

Thanks for the review ^^

Sick...

I was on the ground, covering my eyes at this, as if it were some sort of movie. I can't even describe...

Thanks for the fic... ~Miles Prower~

Author's Response:

Heh, the reaction that I am looking for from practically everyone. It lets me know just how well my insanity plays out.

Thanks for the review! ^^