This, as with all the other chapters, is looking fantastic. And what a great way to introduce Tails! :D
Author's Response: Thanks. Tails was always gonna be a part of this, though the guys are gonna have to do some serious work to heal his hurts, the poor sod. Thanks for your review!
Awesome little chapter here. Shadow plays bass :D I hope to get a bass guitar for my birthday. Wow, Tails seens... emotionally hurt. He is not a freak... :/
Wow, this chapter is amazing. The dance scene was nice. I love it.
WOW, what a title for the next chapter - can't wait to read it! And I had to laugh when I realized why you asked me about the colours under certain light sources; loveloveLOVE authors who do their research! XD
Of course, the fight scenes were very cool, you and grey did a good job. Sword fights do begin to grow on me...
I also liked your characterization of Sonia. I didn't watch much of Sonic underground, but I liked her suspiciousness and intelligence. Does she still have this freakish strength? The chaos aura stuff really is a nice touch, and Shadow realizing how much he'd missed Sonic is heart-warming. :)))
Despite that, doesn't he consider going back to the ritual and apologize?
And of course, had to laugh much at Knuckles' astonishnedness (god, he must hate Shadow's guts now...) and Sonic's primary love interest apparently being his guitar...XD
Please, please, please write more soon. :P
I really like this. Showing Shadow's point of view this time, eh? Well, keep up the good work. ^_^
Wow! You have me hooked in now! ^^
I am seriously surprised that you know about the Sons of Angels too!
That was great, poor hot headed Knuckles^^
I like this chapter. It's about time Sonic called Shadow. Although... I hate Cliffhangers. Why did you have a cliffhanger? Now I need more than you have, Lords above and Below blast it!
Sentzu, Being of Darkness and Light
WOOOO! MY FAVORITE CHAPTER SO FAR! AWESOMENESS!
Please continue this story.
Wow - so cool!^^ I usually don't like AU THAT much, but this one is wonderful - I like the detailed and careful style you use, describing the peculiars of fencing with as much love as the circumstances of their lives. Mind you, though, a description of the Oracle would not have gone amiss. :P My heart goes out to Uncle Chuck...please update soon!
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