Bwahahahahaha!!! That was hilarious!!!! And I love how you made Shadow the uke!!! And a user of dildos!!! Good job!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU! I really appreciate this review!
Hehe...someone's a little horny.XD *shot*
It's kind of short and it all went a little too fast.
Try to add some more info and details.
But I like it anyways.Not too bad for a first strory.
My rating:6.5/10
I think someone was extraordinarily horny when they wrote this. It has little focus on anything, Things move too fast, there are many grammatical errors, ugh, I don't like it at all. And I'm not one for flaming.
rating:
4/10
Author's Response: Sorry. I'll keep your Critique into mind when making the next chapter. It is my first fic after all...
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