It's not bad. There were a few parts that do need to be looked over for grammatical errors, but none of them are from Bunnie. I think that if you actually picture her talking like that...

Than you have hit the nail on the head for her character. Other than that... not too bad.

Author's Response:

Yeah I have a bit of a problem with typing, some of the keys on my computer are slow so that is adds a few spelling errors, but I'm trying my best to fix them, guess I'll just need to read it over more properly.

And english is my second language so sometimes I get confused and have to look over words on a translator which might not turn out right anyway...

Yeah I do like her talking like that, adds to her personality in my opinion!

Thanks for your review!

A rather interesting story so far, it is a unique idea that I assume is fine.
There were many, many gramatical errors. Did you type at the speed of sound?

Author's Response:

Yes I do type extremely fast when I get carried away, which happens a lot... and my slow keys won't keep up but I mostly notice and correct it.

If you mean in Bunnies case then I like her talking like that, and therefor I spell her talking different.

If you mean any other then my bad, I'll just have to look it over more properly.