Wowzer! I cannot express how much I loved this sotry so far and hope to see mroe soon! Now...maybe Shadow refuses to go in next time he transforms, leaving, and when the Werehog awakens he realises his desired mate is not around, breaks free and follows his scent? Just specualting. *fangirls over story* I love it to pieces, keep going!
....SWEET JESUS.
New fav story to stalk!
Seriously, great story. Loved it, unique and its got me hooked.
Hiii there, finally time for another review! (yes, I am plodding my way through here slowly and surely....)
*loved* the scene where sonic wakes up tied up in the closet. XD *resists double entendre with closet here* Him being afraid of needles and doctor-y situation I can fully emphasize with, 'cause I feel VERY much the same, that was really cute :P And awww, he doesn't want Shadow to be there XD
I also like the fact that you brought in Knuckles and pointed out that he is, in fact, very strong and capable. I wonder whether the Master Emerald is affected...
And huh, so this isn't taking place *post* Unleashed, it's an alternate take on the scenario without the planet breaking to pieces this time. Interesting.
Also: He hissed, "That's something I simply cannot ignore."
MANGA MOMENT.
Seriously, you can hear the 'zing' of the white line flashing behind his face in close-up as he narrows his eyes. Giggled like a lunatic when I read it.^^
I like the way Sonic is perky again despite his predicament, but fears for Tails' safety. Everyone very nicely IC.
The only thing that I'd recommend is (especially in the fight scene) substitute all those 'he's and 'himself's with Sonic, Shadow, black hedgehog, werehog, agent, monster, Ultimate Lifeform, transformed hero, Super-Seme, soon-to-be-bottom.... you get the idea XD It's a roleplay of yours and it's fantastic, we readers just need a bit more information. :P
I'm totally loving this so far and you got me hooked, tho, so I hope I'll find the time for the third chappie soon!^^
Wow...that was...unbelievably...down-right...sexy~
I swear I had a mini orga-
Anyway. I LOVE this story with a passion that burns. And you describe what is going on so well and detailed. This is so far one of my favorite chapters. I cannot wait until you upload more scences like that (you know which one I'm talking about ewe~) so I could change my mind!
Sigh..if only Knuckles wasn't there..
Note: Knuckles may be strong, but he does not gove moral support. Getting licked by a crazed fiend on the face is hilarious though^^
Uh.... I think I found a mistake. In the new chapter (3) you have Sonic refer to Shadow as his crush at one point, even though from what I remember you have not yet started anything at all between the two. Not a big issue, but something I just noticed.
OMG please more!!!!
I couldn't help laughing at that! Shadow afraid of getting killed when... XD
Please update soon! I'd love to read more! XD
Oh my gosh... This chapter is amazing. It is just the best so far. I was looking foward to a lemony scene.
Did you refer Shadow as Sonic's crush.
Wh00t, love it! :D
I have to admit, it was the cute summary that drew me in, even if the main part of the first chapter then consisted primarly of angst with a good side-helping of gore and want-to-hug-the-hedgie moments...:P
I do like the idea a lot. I pity Sonic for finding about what has happened to him even at this point when he doesn't know it yet...but yeah, it is a very original approach of the 'werehog' thing, letting him act more like a 'real' werewolf (yeah, it's like saying 'REAL vampires don't sparkle!!!', the war about *facts* when it's FICTIONAL CREATURES PEOPLE cracks me up everytime...) but yeah, I like it!
Shadow was wonderfully IC, Sonic at times seemed a bit too breaky-downy, but I guess that's just me. It is probably justifiable when you think he just VOMITED BLOOD, becvause that would freak anyone out...(except maybe Rouge? XD)
I also have to admit I had to giggle at the beginning of the fic. The moment a 'dark-and-broody' type character in a yaoi fic starts thinking of how this day is gonna be all nice and quiet, I simply can't help but give a fangirl chuckle. XD Wonderful story, I hope I'll find the time to read chapter two soon, you guys are a dream team! :D
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