Heh, I couldn't help but laugh along with Knuckles when Sonic tried to cover himself yet he doesn't wear pants anyways, lol.
Must say, I love so far how the chapters are long. It gives you something to read for a while, unlike stories that have 1,000 word chapters that are done in literally 1 minute.
So much for a day off^^
Well damn... I mean *does a double take*... damn this is good. Keep it up you two! ^^
Wow, this is the best story that I have ever read.
It is so descriptive, I feel like I am actually there. YES! Make Sonic stronger than Shadow!
This is great! I can't wait for more!
I absolutely enjoyed this chapther, it was thrilling. I kept gueesing who Sonic killed: "Eggman? Amy? God no, Tails?" After I saw the word deer, I internally laughed.
Everything that was in this chapter, I enjoyed. You wrote in the deepest detail ever. I am number one fan of both of you.
MORE PLEASE. I think we wanna see werehog action!
Well done to the both of you. I enjoyed just about every part of your first chapter.
I WANT to see more of this!
Great story so far, although, are all of the references in the title and chapter necessary? Lol.
I think you both showed Sonic and Shadow great, perfectly in character. That is a kind of big feat to me, considering how many stories there are about a over caring Shadow, and a heartless Sonic. I hope for you to continue this, the idea is great and unique.
(P.S : Floofie...and Scuzzle...? O..kay then. I won't even ask.)
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