Applause, applause, I SAID...APPLAUSE!!! This is sooooooo goof! Oops...I meant good. I love the part where you add those '~'s and I just loves these scenes. '

He nuzzled me and whispered, "I want to keep you."

I blinked, "Keep me?..."

He nodded, "Yes keep you to love and to use."

I closed my eyes and began to think. If he keeps me, im sure i'll never see my friends again. On the other hand, some part of me was saying I should let him have me... He made me fell so free just now, like i didnt have anyone to worry about. I opened my eyes and saw Shadow looking at me patiently.I took a deep breath and said, "I'm yours Shadow"

He smiled at me lovingly then pulled out and picked me up. He nuzzled me and whispered,"Your body is mine to use and your soul is mine to love"

I purred and said,"Im yours Shadow, body and soul"

"He kissed my forehead then said very gently, "Chaos control" Then we both disappeared, never being seen by anyone again...

and then there was:

Shadow smirked,"Would you like pleasure like this every day?"

"Yes Shadow..." I moaned

"Good~" he said triumphitly. He started moving faster and i yelled, "Shadow! Ahh! So good!"

and THEN there was:Shadow smirked at me then said in a very seductful and lusty tone, "I took your first kiss, I took your first orgasm, now im gonne take your virginity." I gasped. Shadows smirk turned feral, showing all his lond, sharp fangs. I started shaking again but not from fear.

From excitment.

ahhh...That was such a good story...I'm adding it to my favorites!

such a touching ending *cries uncontrollably*

PWP eh? Well, this is the sloppiest story that I have ever seen. I could easily write a better story in my sleep. Did you write this while having sex? This "plot" is a cliche, I've seen it before time and time again. Your grammar made me ill. I could easily MSTing this.

Author's Response:

no skin off my nose for i was just having fun writing. but thank for the review~ ;P