It's fantastic... of course I'm amused easily, but I love the humor you have put into the story... cant wait for more... sounds like an interesting idea... I still want to see how the title plays into it, though...

Author's Response:

I'll be honest: I'm having trouble with the next chapter.  But since people want me to continue, I'll keep working on it!  :)

I particularly enjoy the image of an emasculated Shadow far more than I really should. :)

Although admittedly, the direction you seem to be taking this story concerns me. For a variety of reasons... XD

Author's Response:

As do I...  It's probably not good for our health.

Oh good. ;)

>< My pet peeve is Shadow being at all physically stronger than Sonic. I'm OCD about it. I go mad if Sonic is constantly weaker.
Other than that, it was good ^^

Author's Response:

I was working under the assumption that Shadow would have been 'designed' to be more resistant, though not necessarily physically stronger; denser bones vs. more muscle, if you see what I mean. Perhaps I should have made that clearer...  Shadow's not Knuckles, after all!  XD

Another good chapter! :) I agree with SoS about the merging, but you did much better this chapter. It's hard to have a third person point of view and then different prospectives. I have that trouble a lot. :P Can't wait for more! Poor Shadow... I found the part where Sonic thought of Tails sleeping and then about Shadow's gun under his pillow. It was quite humorous how a once innocent scene changes drastically with a different character. :D Anyways, continue!

This was incredibly entertaining to read. :) I look forward to more writing from you. This was an interesting story and it's oddly curious to see where this is going. Shadow's slowly going to lose the chaos energy that's stored in his body, isn't he?

Regardless, the story is intriguing. You've written extremely well. I saw a few spelling errors along the way, but it was mainly well done.

My only complaint would be that you probably could have merged the two sides of the story together better.  It was kind of hard for us to read the story and rewind through time for Shadow's part. It confused me for a moment ^^;

It was incredibly amusing at parts. I especially love how you crawl into Shadow's head.

Author's Response:

Oh no, spelling errors!  The bane of my existence!  *Charges off to correct them*

And I see your point about merging the two halves.  I'm more used to writing from one perspective at a time, so I'll try something different (and hopefully better) in the next chapter.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  :)