its really strange this story but in a good way and there are some parts i dont get
Author's Response:If you understood everything, then there wouldn't be a point in me writing, because you'd know what was going to happen next! XD
This is a really interesting story. It's gone on my faves list cos I really want to see what happens next.
You've built an incredibly interesting, well-developed world so far that makes you want to know more. And your characterization was good, too.
Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing more.
Author's Response:Wow, praise from Caesar! Thank you! :D
I am slowly working away at a new chapter... Emphasis on the 'slowly' part, but it's getting done.
No SoS, you were not the only one who thought of link. XD
I especially liked this chapter for the fact that Sonic is still... Well... Sonic. :3
Author's Response:*Insert item-get theme here* XD
Thanks! I'm glad to know Sonic still sounds like Sonic; I have a harder time writing him than, say, Shadow.
Hmm. For some reason, I liked how you described Shadow in this chapter. So much to the point where I want to draw him. I haven't drawn Shadow in his Sir Lancelot attire yet, and I think I may do that pretty soon.
Anyway, this was great chapter, and I can't help but wonder about that stare Shadow gave Sonic for a split second before he made his exit. :D
Author's Response:I've been planning on drawing everyone, eventually, but armour isn't my forté. It'd be great to see other people taking a pencil to Sir Lancelot (or anyone else).
*Insert foreboding music here* :D
Am I the only one who thought of Link when Sonic got dressed and the Master Sword which was so haphazardly tossed aside. Lol.
Anyway, I never want to throw Amy off a cliff. I love the gal. She's great. XD Although I won't hide the fact that I want Sir Shadow to pounce Sir Sonic. But, of course that's just me and my fan obessiveness.
I was looking forward to an update to this. I was incredibly excited to see this had a new chapter. Shadow is such a mystery, but I want to know more about him. Especially since he bares such similarties to Sonic. Oh ho~ I wish I knew what was coming next. Crawling into your head to get spoilers would be amazing but... I guess I just have to wait here patiently.
Regardless you've done marvelously, all fangirl squealing aside. Great job!
Author's Response:I don't know if I've ever inspired fangirl squealing before. Now I feel all special... In a good way. :D
I like Amy too, she just tends to gather a lot of grief... I'm trying to write her as being more mature, since I think that's all she really needs to become someone in her own right, rather than just Sonic's number-one fangirl.
And unfortunately, I don't have room for anyone else inside my brain; you'll have to wait for someone else to move out before getting in.
How terrible. :P Shadow subconsciously planned that, I know it! no, just kidding. Ha ha. I loved the chapter! :) I was having too much fun reading it myself. ;)
Author's Response:... *Shifty eyes*
Thanks! It's nice to hear that it's a good read. :)
This was a clever beginning. I really enjoyed it, especially the small bout between Shadow and Sonic. I'm eager to see what else you plan on bringing into a story like this. If you even mention the word 'Knight' around me, I go off to raise my banners and swing a sword around like a psychopath.
I really enjoyed the start. All of the transitions were extremely smooth and I found the exposition very nicely done. I look forward to more from you, I'm definitely adding you to a favorites :)
Author's Response:Sword-swinging is the best part of being a knight! Much better than balls and stuffy suits. *Oooh, foreshadowing*
Thank you very much! I appreciate it. :D
Wow, this is cool! I never played a Sonic game newer than Sonic & Knuckles, besides Sonic Unleashed, so is this based off a game, because it seems too origonal...?
Author's Response:It's based off of me listening to the Sonic and the Black Knight themesong for several hours without a break. Good music... :D
But aside from the 'hedgehogs with swords' element, that's all I'm borrowing from the game.
Three words: Conitnue this please!
Author's Response:Your wish is my command, Sir Knight!
Hmm, interesting! I like it so far. Please update soon. :D
Author's Response:I will!
... Though what 'soon' means may differ from person to person. XD
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