Yay, Shadow is back! No, Shadow must explain! Yay, they have the emeralds! No, Eggman didn't get killed!
Author's Response:Eggman really did deserave worse, but the story isn't quite finished yet. Perhaps he'll get what's comming to him, or maybe not, who knows?
When Is The Next One Coming out? Please continue Chapter To Chapter quickly! Your chapters are addicting!
Author's Response: :D glad you think so! One a week is about as fast as I can go unfortunately, don't get much time to write during the week.
UGH!!!! If it were possible, I'd jump into this story and strangle Eggman to death! D:<
Good job though :)
Author's Response: I know right! He definitely deserves it.
Please Continue!!!!!
Author's Response: No worries, I've already started the next chapter. Should be up by Saturday. Thanks for the encouragement and rating. I always appreciate a review!
Eggman will die! Sonic will kill him!
Good chapter.
Author's Response:Thanks for the review! Dr. Eggman definitley desearves a good beating, but something tells me Sonic's going to have other problems to worry about.
And that's all I'm saying!
i realy love this story plz make more it is so good i love what shadow did because i hate amy she is such a pain in the ass
Author's Response:And you are now my new favorite person! Haha, thanks for the encoraging review. And now worries, there will be more. I'd say at the lastest I should have the next chapter up by next friday/saturday.
I find the formatting extremely hard to read; the first paragraph of the first chapter was so full of dialogue, I couldn't tell who was saying what. :(
Most stories are written with a separate line for each character speaking. If you space things out a bit, it will be much easier for us to read, and we can get into the story faster!
Author's Response:Alrighty, no prob. I'll work on re-organizing this and hopefully have it done by tomorrow. Thanks for feedback!
Changing POVs midchapter is usually a big NONO for writers. It breaks up the flow of the story and comes out awkward and clunky. Try to stick to writing from a 3rd person view if you want to tell the story from the view of more than one person.
Author's Response:Agreed, I kept away from that in the second chapter, and you're right, it has a much better flow. I'm actually thinking about editing the first chapter so it's more like the second.
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