Great story! A few grammatical errors here and there but did not affect the overall story. Hope to see more from you. Always has been one of my favorite FanFictions on this site.

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Lol...

Extraordinary grammatical malfunction. I am bored, so I will read the rest of this pointless story.
I would be Sonic. I am always trying to get things done quick, I am (so I have been told) really nice, I like to give stuff away like money, I walk at a jogging speed and can run really fast, and my favorite food is a chilidog (ironicly, my favorite food before I knew it was Sonic's).

Author's Response: Way to kill someones mood, lol. I don't CARE

Well, this is interesting so far. Noticable grammatical problems...
My favorite character besides Sonic or Shadow is Tails. :)

Author's Response: I'm fixing everything right now!! :) wish me luck!!

Although the grammar is off at times things can get a little confusing when too many people are talking, I find this pretty entertaining. Funny parts are funny and cute parts are cute. Keep it up, and if anything, just throughly check your speelings etc. before posting.

Author's Response:

Will do!! :)