Can you please write the next chapter? D: I need to read it now! Btw, I love this story :D Good job.
Author's Response:I just updated xD Don't worry, I'll be working on it :)
I missed this chapter when it first came out. Now I need to add it to my favourites, so I'll get e-mails as soon as you update.
This is definitely a cliffhanger! There are strange noises in the background, Sonic is hiding something, adn Tails is unable to reach them. What could possibly happen next? D:
I can't wait to find out!
Author's Response:Thanks!
I'm glad you're interested :D
Whoops, forgot to review!
Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter, but cliffhangers are tough. It's a way of living in good stories. xD
Author's Response:I guess xD It keeps people interested at least.
Thanks for your help and review :)
Nice story!I love it.Looking forward for the rest of it,keep it up!♥
Author's Response:Thank you! :)
Another good chapter! There are a few English errors here and there, but nothing too jarring. Do you have someone to read things over for you, before you post them? That might be something to look into. :)
I really enjoyed when Sonic was sitting in the doorway and talking. Who was he talking to, and why? I have my suspicions, but I'll wait until we find out the answer to see if I'm right...
You seem to be very productive, when you get bored! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it's finished.
Author's Response:I don't really have anyone, I'm a bit too shy to ask for help. I feel like I'm being a nuisance when I ask people for stuff :/
Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Yay, an update! ^_^
Ooh, this is getting better and better! I am getting excited! :D
Author's Response:Why, thank you xD
Mysterious...
I think I know what island this is...
Author's Response:You do? We'll see if you're right :D
For not having a plot, this is really fun to read. :)
I don't think this should count as filler; I really enjoyed the conversation between Sonic and Shadow. There's character and story progress, and it's making things even more exciting! There's a lot of tension in the background... It's almost creepy.
Please continue! I'm looking forward to whatever happens next.
Author's Response:I know, right? xD
I wasn't really sure if it conveyed the right amount of loneliness and suspicion, but thank you! I think I have an idea where to take this next, but I need to develop it a little more first...
I just noticed that this was updated... So, yay ;D
This is extremely wierd, absolutely nothing here. Emptiness. Shadow needs to lighten up, it makes me sad :(.
Author's Response:I think so too xD Hopefully they'll come across something more interesting later on.
Fluffy. XD
I like this story, so far. You write quite well; is English your first language?
I'm hoping that something exciting will happen soon... :)
Author's Response:Glad you enjoyed it :) And no, far from it. I don't come from anywhere near an English speaking country xP
So do I :D
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