You're welcome! It's not that it sucked, it just the fact that it wasn't rape. But I like the scene you have now, you are becoming better. Until next time!
The rape scene... isn't like an actual rape. Sonic would not let Shadow kiss him so willingly and Shadow... he's fine (a rapist but fine). Sonic would at least give a fight before even accepting his fate before letting Shadow even touch him so intimately. The rape should have a struggle, some shouts, and then the description of a dick being shoved painfully up one's ass. (Just read adult fanfiction, it's terrifying!) Update soon!
Author's Response:HEHEHE...For you, I am changing it! HEHEHE...Why am I still laughing...? HEHEHE...STOP IT!!!
Bad Shadow! But... surely you have a reason for him acting out so badly (background/history?) and the note (midnight rape?). Anyway, update!
Author's Response:Wow! It's like you've read my mind! Actually, I think that a lot of stories include midnight rape...Hehehe...I am working on chapter two. I hope you will enjoy it when it comes out. Thanks for reviewing again! ^_^ (Is it tiring? ^_^lll)
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